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Friday, 29 March 2013

PART1

A GRUESOME VERDICT

 I drove on the freeway with windows rolled down.The gentle breeze embraced me warmly,playing with my hair.Birds chirruped merrily as buttery sunshine illuminated the green expanse and crowns of myriad of primordial trees.Another glorious morning of picturesque Karnal.
                                                                                                My bearings were a precise reflection of the balmy weather.As I smoothed in the Parking lot of the hospital,I sighed dreamily 'What could go wrong on such a chherful day'.But apparently I was  about to find out soon. I entered my cabin after exchanging pleasantries on the way with my collegues and soon I was so busy with my patients,going round the wards and treating the ailing that every other thought flew out of my mind like bats out of hell.Time passed in a jiffy and it was only in the afternoon that I got some moments  free to sip coffee in the confines of my room absolutely unaware of the storm brewing outside.
                                                                          Suddenly the door of  my room flew open with a loud crash making me to jump a foot in the air and splash the scalding coffee on my hand.Nursing my burnt,I looked up angrily at the newcomer,ready to give him/her a piece of mind, only  to find Sister Marianne doubled   up with breathlessness and looking dishevelled.She clutched the door for support and gasped half-formed sentence.
"Down...E.R.....baby injured.....DR.Raghavan.....calling you.quick."
I jumped up immediately  and chased her out in the cooridor pell-mell.I had always thought of sister Marianne as one of those people who are almost incapable of doing any sort of intense physical labour but now as I tried to keep up with her,Iwas struck by her agility.We ran down the corridor and a flight of stairs,taking two at a time.Finally we burst into the E.R. only to find it bustling with activities.Tension was palpable.I hurriedly made my way to the center of all the efforts only to stop short on seeing the most gruesomest  sight I had ever seen which would continue to haunt me till my last breath.                                                                                                                                  There on the vinyl sheets lay a baby girl,badly mutilated.Her soft skin was covered in bruises and burn marks as if she were branded.Her right leg was lying at an odd angle as if it was broken.She was callously bitten at several places and had sustained head injuries.

5 comments:

  1. This is just great! A really intriguing beginning... "What could go wrong after this pleasant Morning..?" Indeed, anything could go wrong anytime...

    You are an amazing writer.. I am hooked on to your story... waiting for the next update...!

    Bye

    KF

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  2. Hey, where is the next part? Waiting eagerly..! Please update...!

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  3. Hey, dewdrop/Akku

    Where is the next part. Keep posting yaar. I have been waiting for the update...
    Don't worry about having no comments. You have to be consistent in your posting to attract the readers... please keep posting.

    I had the same experience when i opened my blog... there were hardly any comments.. but kept on posting and then slowly gained the viewership. So keep posting. Your writing is much much better than mine. A sure success...! Waiting...!

    Reply to khushifan@gmail.com

    Love
    KF

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    1. Hey khushifan
      I am so sorry for not updating for such a long time.There was problem in connection,but now I am back in action.Thank you so very much for such sweet and encouraging comments.I am overwhelmed.I promise to update from tomorrow only if you are the only reader.
      Love
      Akku

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  4. dear dewdrop, amazing story,,,,,,,,,,,,u r brilliant writer .m busy now days dear ,my exam started now,,,,,,wen i get time i read your story and cmnt,,,,,,,,,,,,,take care dear,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

    rriya

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